In the latest newspaper edition, I found a very interesting article about a walk to end Alzheimer's Disease. I feel that this is a very important step in finding a cure for Alzheimer's Disease. Also, I think that it was a great idea to include this article in your newspaper because it creates a lot of awareness in our community about this dangerous disease. I also found it useful that you put a lot of people's personal experiences into your article because it motivates others to join this cause and it adds a sense of emotions into the article. I hope this walk pays off, and I hope that we find a cure for Alzheimer's Disease soon.
Age 12, Grade 7
Member of Boy Scouts of Troop 160